Critique Group

I thought I might never make any more progress on this project. It was moribund, that's more-eee-bund-o, my friend, but finally I am involved in a critique group. The first ten pages need lots of work, and will for a while because what I do is apply the advice to the next ten pages each week. And, boy the advice is fantastic! Finally, I have somewhere to go with making this thing fit to read. I can tell it's a good story, because my readers all want to know what happens next. I thought so, now I know so. Anyhow, it will take approximately 21 more weeks to go throught the whole thing, at which time I think I'll have something to show the world at last.

Thank you to my critique partners (they know who they are) and thank you for reading this. Wow. I'll keep this posted as things go along. Later . . .